THE LONG WINTER · v4 — Blue Revision
TOMAS OKONJO
Lead · Peter Wren · appears in 4 scenes across 3 story days.
Character arc
TOMAS OKONJO
Complicity hardens into control, then collapses in the cellar.
Scenes
4
Speaking
4
Lines
288
Words
2,914
Night scenes
1
Locations
3
First
Sc. 1
Last
Sc. 121
Scene-by-scene appearances
Every scene where TOMAS OKONJO is present, with story day, page load and extraction status.
| Scene | Heading | Day | Pages | Status |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | EXT. FROZEN LAKE — DAWN Ines cuts a hole in the ice and pulls up a flooded duffel bag. She counts the money and burns the passport. | D1 | 1–3 | approved |
| 2 | INT. OKONJO FARMHOUSE — KITCHEN — MORNING Tomas confronts Ines about the bag. Nadia listens from the stairwell. The radio reports a missing person. | D1 | 3–6 | approved |
| 6 | INT. SHERIFF STATION — INTERVIEW ROOM — DAY Vance interviews Tomas. Tomas lies about the timeline. Coffee cup detail pays off later. | D3 | 17–21 | approved |
| 10 | INT. FARMHOUSE — CELLAR — NIGHT Tomas burns the ledger. Ines finds him. The last line of the act lands in silence. | D4 | 35–38 | approved |
Performance & department requirements
- Fire-adjacent work (Sc. 10)
- Aging makeup — Act III
Departments touched
Relationships
- INESWife · 3 shared
- VANCEFormer classmate · 1 shared
Dialogue excerpts
Pulled straight from the script pages with page anchors intact.
No dialogue for TOMAS OKONJO on the pages currently loaded in the reader.
Schedule impact
Not yet placed on a shooting day.
Story days
Risks & flags
- Ice/water work
- Practical fire
- Cold-weather exposure
- Music clearance (radio cue)
- Continuity — coffee cup
- Smoke in enclosed set